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It was nice the flare makes it look like a super saiyan.cThe spikes and fire are well placed and I would love to use in fan game. It is...

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Scouting the Tracing Stars Chapter 1 TF2XOW
     Scout stretches on a lawn chair inside the fortress. He is bored and stretches out and stands up. He puts on the red white and blue headband that Soldier gave to him over his hat and headphones and runs out. He passes the Medic holding a glass jar with someone's blood. "Medic I am going to run," said Scout. "Ok be back before dinner," Medic calls sighing knowing Scout won't be back by then. Scout runs down the stairs. 'Scout take your WEAPONS," Soldier yells in case Scout found somebody attacked. Scout grabbed his FOrce a Nature, Winger, and Atomizer. But as Scout leaps above a table randomly stationed in the corrider he kicks open the door getting pace and sees something or somebody. It looked like a person but the spikiness of the hair which looked fake and the paleness of the skin made it look like a mannequin. The thing was wearing a futeristic pair of what appeared to be white crocs, yellow pants with a decently large butt (Scout whistled at that), and a Britis
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Death Battle Jango Fett vs tracer prelude

Kaduking: Pistols they are awesome and so are science fiction
grimmie: Today two legendary users of blaster pistols will fight to the death.
Kaduking: Jango Fett the most feared Bounty hunter of the old republic
Grimmie: And Tracer the speedy hero of Overwatch
Kaduking: I am Kaduking and she's Grimmie and we analyze the fighters weapons and skills to see who would win a DESTH battle
(cue opeaning))
kaduking: A tragic plane accident leaves Lena Oxford nearly desd in a ghost like state trapped in time.
Geimmie: Lucky for her though her friend Winston a bigass gorilla who is also a genius made her a chromo accelerator to keep her anchored in the present.
kadking: With the overwatch she fought in the Great Crisis and now fights a Blue sniper lady
grimmie: She has two pulse pistols that fire rapidly and reload in seconds, her ultimate a pulse bomb which stuns or kills, and her chromo blink where she goes forward or backwards and if she's hurt and conscio
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The Administrator’s Office

      Drake and the Administrator are talking about something personal. “In the blue briefcase you will find a golden idol of the Aztecs.” “Are you sure ma’am,” asks Nathan Drake. “I am positive,” said the Administrator laughing knowing she put the idol in there and was using Nathan as a tool to train her mercs. Drake smirks and says, “Soon that will be mine.”

      The 8 Mercs all except scout who was at the time sleeping stood by the Administrator. “Some time tomorrow a man will be here trying to get the Intel if you kill him you get a golden primary weapon.” The men whooped and Demoman burped and said loudly and confused, “What's happening laddies?” The men face palm and re-explain everything.

                                  Drake’s Plane

      Nathan Drake is sitting on the plane relaxing. He was almost ready to leap out of the plane. “Elena you ready,” asked Nathan Drake, “Once we get this Idol we will be rich.” Drake smiled and Elena nodded and tossed Drake the parachute. “It is easy all I have to do is count backwards from five,” Drake said. But just then off the ground Soldier is firing rockets at the plane. “Drake what is going on,” asked Elena in a panic as the wing catches fire. “I don’t know it appears to be missiles,” said Drake tightening his Rhub Al liki scarf and looks out as another missile hits the plane but hits the cockpit and the plane nosedives towards the dirt and Drake leaps out of the plane with parachute and evades the rockets and lands gently just as the plane starts a flaming inferno of an explosion.

                         The 2fort

“ELENA,” Drake calls as the plane crashes and explodes. Drake runs to the wreckage and out of the cockpit falls a scorched Elena with a massive glass shard sticking out her chest with blood dripping freely. “You killed her. Now get dunked on.” Soldier charges and fires a rocket but it misses and Drake rolls away and uses the submachine gun to fire rapidly and Soldier crumples his helmet splits and a bullet hole is on his head. Demoman fires the sticky bombs but Drake rolls away as they bombard him. He then has his scarf lit on fire by Pyro. But he buries the machete in Pyro’s chest who mmphs in pain as he falls and bleeds out and Drake fires the AK-47 which kills Demoman due to it hitting his chest bombs blowing him to pieces. Drake runs with the sword of Drake and decapitates Heavy. “Rous, Rous,” cries Medic swinging the bonesaw but Drake catches his arm and stabs Medic in the throat with the machete and watches him bleed before running at Engineer and dodging Sentries dispatches him with a quick shot of his revolver. He sees a man in a fedora aiming at him and fires making a hole in his scarf. Dake takes out the Dragon sniper and fires through Sniper’s scope and into his eye who then falls from his tree house. “This has gone long enough,” said Spy attempting a backstab but Drake who ducks and stabs Spy through the mouth with machete twists and pulls. Spy uses the dead ringer but Drake said, “Nope,” and shoots him with his revolver and Spy falls dropping his own revolver. Drake runs down the stairs to the Intel on the way shooting Tracer in the chest through the orb saying, “This is my death battle.” He runs in and grabs Intel and steps out.

Enter the Scout

      Scout wakes up with flashing lights. The Administrator is screaming, “Scout get up intruder he has the Intel.” Scout leaps out of the old scratched up couch and ran out the door. He saw the red flashing strobe lights and leaped over a table and tumbled into a wall and shoves off it. “I wonder who the Blue team sent,” wonders Scout aloud. He runs down the stairs quickly and stumbles down it passing the shotgun rack. “Hmm I will need more than my primaries,” said Scout grabbing numerous shotguns and placing them on his back or in the Messenger bag. He puts the Pistol, the Winger, Pretty Boy's Pocket Pistol, Lugermorph, and a can of Bonk into their own individual pouches and holsters. He grabs ammunition and runs. He kicks open the push only door and sees his team lying dead on the battlefield and a yellow leg sticking out of the Intel room entrance. He sees a guy wearing a tan shirt and a blue scarf. “Let’s dance a**h**e you’re dead,” shouts Scout. Drake turns toward the Blue Scout and said, “I don’t wanna hurt you so go turn tail boy I don’t want to hurt a child,’ points his AK-47 and raises hands in frustration. “Come on how come every time I find the Holy grail somebody wants me dead,” groans Drake as he sticks a magazine in his AK-47. FIGHT! “Shut up,” yells Scout pulling the lever on his Scattergun and fires at Drake who leaps behind the wooden pillar of the bridge. Drake emerges from the cover and fires the AK-47 rapidly. RATATATATATTAT! The bullets hit the crates but Scout runs off and evades the fire and double jumps and fires the Scattergun down at Drake who leaps off the bridge and into behind a crate which the numerous shots of the Scattergun wouldn’t phase. ‘I need a quick fix,” said Drake taking out a grenade and hurling it. “One two three,” counts Drake slowly. Scout turns as the grenade bounces by him. “What the h**l,” shouts Scout as the bomb detonates but he double jumps to safety with only a few scratches. Getting closer Scout switches to the Shortstop. Drake instantly takes out his Defender and Scout seeing Drake fires and the crate falls apart with a wooden cracking noise. Drake fires back at Scout who double jumps to a side and leaps away. Drake fires four times one hitting the fort. Scout fires again grazing Drake’s hip. “Agh,” said Drake putting his hand to stop the bleeding. He walks up to Scout and slugs him in the face. Scout stumbles back and holsters his pistol. “Let’s brawl,” said Scout hurling a punch. Drake ducks and sends a powerful uppercut to Scout who stumbles. Scout kicks Drake in the crotch and hurls a high kick to Drake cutting his cheek. He switches to his bat as Drake crumbles from the kick. “Ok check out this everyone I’m batting a thousand,” taunts Scout hitting Drake in the face making him grunt and then in the stomach making him fall on his back. Scout grabs Drake and pulls him to his feet and Drake is bleeding by his noise and as Scout prepares the Home RUn taunt Drake takes out a grappling hook and lands on a tall crate. “What,” Scout says in confusion running there. Drake takes out the Tau-Sniper rifle and pulls the bolt aims and fires. “I know what snipers do,” said Scout running faster and evading the bullet as Drake pulls the bolt to eject the bullet. He switches to his M4 when Scout shoots at him with the Soda Popper sending Drake flying as the crates all broke. He lands roughly and Scout rushes him and then finally does the Home run taunt sending Drake flying into a pile of crates which fall on him. “Glad that’s over now to get that…,” said Scout but Drake gets up with a rocket and Scout turns just as he sees a flying rocket. “AW cr**,” curses Scout as he is blown up and smoke covers the room. “Goodbye kid,” said Drake but Scout walks just fine with a can of Bonk. “You know this stuff incinerates your liver but it is cool when you don’t want to die,” said Scout,. “Stand down kid, you’re outmatched,” said Drake firing the M4 rapidly but it all misses and bounces off. The fight moves to the bridge “Oh f**k,” curses Drake as Scout swings a bat at him and Drake stumbles back and accidentally steps on a sticky bomb. “Aw shit,” they both cursed as they fell into an underground mine with their weapons flying out of them into darkness as the bridge breaks.

 

The mine

    Drake lands roughly with only his Defender and machete.  Scout lands on his feet with only the pistol and his bat. Drake rushes Scout swinging his machete scout ducks and tries another bat swing but Drake uses the machete to parry causing Scout to stumble back. “You’re going to be freaking dominated,” said Scout. “Whatever you say as long as your loud mouth meets my fist,” said Drake punching Scout in the nose. “Agh you broke my nose,” yelled Scout. “That was for breaking mine,” said Drake attempting to slice Scout with the machete. Scout double jumps and switches to the pistol and fires at Drake but horribly misses as he isn’t accurate when he runs. Drake takes out the Defender twirls and fires at Scout. “Hey hotshot taste these bullets,” said Drake firing the bullets. Scout runs firing back and Drake pursues. Drake gives chase and Scout turns and swings the bat surprising Drake sending him to his knees. Scout points his pistol. ‘Goodbye thief it’s been fun while it lasted,” said Scout. But as he pulls his trigger it clicks as it is empty. “Damn it,” cursed Scout as Drake hurls a punch. Scout stumbles back and Drake finds his AK-47 on the ground. Scout reloads but leaps behind a rock as Drake fires his favorite rifle with the intent of finally kill the pesky boy. But Scout finds his weapons too and fires back with the Force a NAture all shots miss and the rocks are instead hit. Drake shrugs hearing a train. He runs off leaving Scout there and leaps on the passing train.

     

The Train

    Drake pants in tired as the train reaches above ground. He sighs in relief and pops open the briefcase and sticks the figure in his pocket finally being done and straps the case toh is back. “Glad that’s over,” sighs Drake. He climbs in and sees a familiar face. “Can’t hide from me,” said Scout cocking his Force a Nature. “Did you miss me,” asked Drake putting a fresh magazine in the AK-47. Civilians scream as they starts fire. Scout running off and firing the shotgun and Drake firing that assault rifle. A police man approaches them but Scout turns and shoots him sending the Policemen flying out of the train with a huge hole in his gut with his liver hanging out. A blonde teenage girl is on her phone texting on Twitter, “OMG these guys are fighting on a train.” Drake bursts in and fires at Scout but the teenager falls instead and what used to be her head now a mashed bloody messed falls on her phone Drake not wanting more innocents dying climbs the ladder to the roof and Scout confronts him. “You have nowhere to run so why not join the fun,” taunted Scout. Drake takes out the sniper revolver and fires a few times while Scout runs at him and jumps around avoiding the shot and kicks the gun out of his hand off the train. Scout swings his bat but Nathan Drake dodges and headbutts Scout in the gut making him stumble. Drake then grabs Scout’s arm and twists it making him drop the bat making it fall off the train. Drake hurls a punch catching scout off guard hitting his chest. Scout runs at him and swings his fists rapidly hitting Drake numerous times who grabs Scout and headbutts him in the head dazing him. Drake unholsters a revolver and fires at Scout who runs around Drake firing his own pistol. But Drake is nowhere/ Scout looks around in confusion. “Where is that bastard,” asks Scout. “Right here pal,” shouts Drake shoving Scout back inside and dropping a grenade. Drake leaps off the train and into a jeep. In the train Scout sees the grenade. “Aw fuck,” curses Scout.

     The Jeep

Drake drives the jeep and laughs, “Piece a cake,” laughs Drake driving casually. Just then he hears footsteps and looks behind him. Scout has drank Bonk and survived. He is catching up. “Come on why can’t he just die,” groans Drake. Scout leaps onto the jeep and pulls himself up. “Why won’t you stay dead,” wonders Drake out loud. “I was going to ask you the same thing,” said Scout. Drake takes out the machete and swings at Scout who ducks and swings his Atomizer Bat catching Drake in the gut. Nathan crumples and Scout prepares a home run taunt when Drake shoots the bat sending it flying and headbutts scout and then he leaps off the jeep. Scout sees the wall he crashes in and doing a final gambit shoots drake in the gut as drake hits the ground hard. But the jeep hits the wall exploding. Leaving both men saying aw crap and laying critically wounded. Drake sees a jumbo jet and makes a run for it.
                                                        The Plane
    Drake checks both mirrors and shoots the pilots. "Hello people I am Nathan Drake and I am now your freaking pilot,' said NAthan Drake taking off whistling the TF2 theme song. The Scout gets up drinks Bonk and runs for the plane firing the Force a Nature off the ground lifts the Pretty boy pocket pistol so he does not get hurt and double jumps before triple jumping with the Atomizer. On the plane he grabs his Shortstop. "Freeze have any of you losers seen a loser in a blue ugly ass scarf," Scout said. A tall man points at the cockpit and Drake leaps out of it sending it in auto pilot but Scout shoots the controls. "Shit you doomed us all," Nathan Drake shouted. He takes out the Defender pistol and fires at Scout who sidesteps and lets a few men take the bullets. Nathan Drake takes out the Machete before side stepping a Shortstop bullet. Scout switches to the Flying gullotine and flings it at Nathan who hides behind a seat and a blonde businesswoman in the face who bleeds and falls off the chair. Natah runs at Scout who swings the Sandman. Drake deflects with the machete and kicks Scout in the bnathroom before locking it from the outside. He walks away. But in the bathroom scout uses a match he found to light his bonk on fire and use it as a bomb and the door exploads. "What the hell again," Nathan groaned taking out his AK-47. But it's too late the plane rams into a building and the plane explouds and bboth men leap out the window and parachute into the ground a jungle. But NAthan rams into Scout before slicing his cheek with the machete. And scout shoots Nathan in the gut with the shortstop before they land/

                                                           Saxton's Artificial Jungle
    Scout fires the Soda popper and Nathan fires the AK-47 all shots hit the others' bullets. And Scout switches to the Crit a COla and mixes it with BONK and runs at Nathan invincible and swings the Atomizer and Drake goes flying. "Gotta knock it outta the park," Scout shouts. Drake hits a palm tree and gets up and spits blood. He loads the RPG and fires. Scout is walking away but leaps making the rocket miss. Nathan charges with Francis drake's blade and Scout the shortrune blade but Nathan stabs Scout in the chest. Scout pulls the blade out and bleeds a lt. rake fires a rocket and after beign blown up. He gets up and you can see his chest. "You're gonna get dominated," Scout yeleld before Drake shoot s him with pistol and Scout screams but survives. Drake runs before scout could counter sticks the Ak-47 into his moutn and shoots leaving Scout's head to be blopwn up. Brains and skull matter fly everywhere. Blood pools beneath him. Drake falls bloodied and badly injured. "of course I beat him and than die," He quotes. He lays before a helocopter with Sully and nathan carried where he passes out in the helocopter. "You're stronger than I thought," Lara Croft said walking over and kisses his forehead and Drake smirks in his "sleep." KO!!

Kaduking: That was brutal.
Grimmie: Indeed. WHile Scout was faster and looked more durable. Drake is indeed stronger.
Kaduking: While to send a 300 pound man flying takes 1,800 pounds of force. Drake pushed a 1 ton crate wjoch is 2000 pounds 200 pounds more. 
Grimmie: And his weapons are way more reliable and accurate and do more damage. Instead of being faster Nathan's are reliable and have one shotted people. Scout struggles knocking out Heavy.
Kaduking: And Drake survived way more powerful explosions.
Grimmie: Indeed.
Kaduking: Scout was knocked out of the park
Grimmie: The winner is Nathan Drake
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   The alarm is rushing and his team is on vacation. So Pyro hears that the intel has been taken so the Blue Pyro rushes out with his Nostromo Napalmer, flamethrower, Panic attack, shotgun, Flare gun, and fire axe and rushes out to the open and sees a shocking sight. A shirtless man tipping a fedora and smirking twirling the blue inteeligence on his finger. "Mmph da mmph," Pyro mumbles aggressively meaning Give that back . This time it was not goofball fairy land it was kill this loser. Ace smirked, "What did you say hotshot I am not giving this back and come get me hotshot," Ace taunts. FIGHT! Pyro begins by firing the Napalmer and Ace becomes fire. "Mmph," Pyro said in confusion as his fire just morphed into Ace. "Hahah can't touch this  KAGERO," Ace shouted. Teh flare stream hit Pyro full on but his rubber absorbed it only leaving him stumbling. "So you don't get affected too," said Ace, "HIGAN finger guns." Pyro is confused as Ace uses finger guns to blast fire. Pyro leaps away from the firy blasts and retaliates behind a crate by firing the Flare gun. Ace becomes fire and the flare passes through. Ace runs at Pyro. "MMPH," Pyro growls swinging his fire axe. Ace sidesteps and swings the knife catching the axe before kicking Pyro in the gut. Pyro stumbles before noticing he has room and fires the Panic attack. Ace turns into fire and the bullets pass through him before hurling a punch at Pyro's jaw. "Da fuq," He curses. Ace growls and shouts, "Hibashira," A pillar of fire covvers them and Pyro coughs the punch broke some of the glass and the fire is absorbing a bit and the smoke is coming in. Pyro leaps away and fires the flare gun. Ace dodges to the side and Pyro fires his Hadouken taunt. "Ah CRAAAAAAAP," Ace shouts getting hot sending him flying into a pile of crates which falll on him. He gets up with a bloody lip and multiple cuts. "You're good but it's time for my ace in the hole HOTARUBI and JUJIKA!" A cross of fire hits Pyro leaving a firey explosion and the balls hove around Pyro who is weakened. He mutters Aw crap before it blows up knocking Pyro out. Ace bows his head and falls asleep.
ONE HOUR LATER!
    Pyro waks up and punches Ace waking up before pounding him with the fists. Ace sidesteps and takes out his staff whacking Pyro in the face. Pyro swings huis axe and Ace sidesteps. But Pyro swings over and over again shattering the staff before burying the axe's back into Ace;s chest. ace cries out in surprise and pulls theaxe out. Ace kicks Pyro the side as he fires the Panic attack sending blasts of bullets which Ace dodges all but one hitting him in the gut. Pyro leaps at ace seeing a lollipop instead. But Ace thought of something that may kill him too. "DAI ENKAI ENTEI!!!!" Ace screams. Pyro looks and sees fire consume them and a firey explosion covers Teufort. When the smoke clears up the building is shattere dnad Pyro sees Pauline and the Administrator's seared body as he lays his legs and arms broken and a huge glass shard sticking out of his chest. He gurgles up blood. Ace nurses a broken arm and spits blood his hat is singed and his hair is down and his face is covered in sweat. He takes out his hand and rips the mask off. "Let's see what you are the fandom wanna knows," Ace taunts ripping the mask out revealing a face similar to Soldier's. "HIGAN!!" ace yells making finger guns and as Pyro looks his face explouds. His eyes fly everywhere and so does brain matter. Ace turns and walks away, "Ace in the hole!!"  

Kaduking: That was brutal. 
Grimmie: While his suitprotected his mask might be taken off. And also Ace is naturally immune and Pyro will eventually take flare and fire damage and ace never did.
Kaduking: His greatest feat was taking out a whole team but not with his bare hands Ace has dealt with stronger people. This was anAce in the hole
Grimmie; The winner is Ace


NEXT UP
Boba fett flies in
And a mysterious figure with aviator sunglasses points two pistols 
     Scout stretches on a lawn chair inside the fortress. He is bored and stretches out and stands up. He puts on the red white and blue headband that Soldier gave to him over his hat and headphones and runs out. He passes the Medic holding a glass jar with someone's blood. "Medic I am going to run," said Scout. "Ok be back before dinner," Medic calls sighing knowing Scout won't be back by then. Scout runs down the stairs. 'Scout take your WEAPONS," Soldier yells in case Scout found somebody attacked. Scout grabbed his FOrce a Nature, Winger, and Atomizer. But as Scout leaps above a table randomly stationed in the corrider he kicks open the door getting pace and sees something or somebody. It looked like a person but the spikiness of the hair which looked fake and the paleness of the skin made it look like a mannequin. The thing was wearing a futeristic pair of what appeared to be white crocs, yellow pants with a decently large butt (Scout whistled at that), and a British leather jacket with metallic straps on the back and goggles. 
       Scout pokes the body with the Atomizer and it reveals itself to be human and a girl. The body (Tracer) rolls over revealing a massive wound which ripped her lower chest and upper stomach. Scout smells the wound which is rancid and still fresh. "MEDIC," Scout yells. Medic runs out. "Jawohl," yelled Medic until he saw the body. "Should I finish her off," Scout says pointing the Winger at her. "Nein let me take her," Medic said. "No you're just going to experiment on her," Scout yells. "Ich weiß nicht, wovon du redest," Medic said. "Nobody speaks German but you," Scout shouts. "I know no such thing," Medic shakes his head and makes Scout carry the body away. After gently or gentle for Scout puits her down he just whistles and runs off.
     An hour passes and Tracer finally stirs. "Where am I," she asks Medic, "Last thing I remember love, was 2 men arguing." "Vell I am the Medic and I vill take care of you," said Medic. "Who was that cute boy who brought me here," Tracer asks. "Who Scout," Medic asks. "Yes," said Tracer, "I want him to take care of me," Tracer said. "Shit," Medic uttered under his breath before walking away to fetch that boy.  
Scouting the Tracing Stars Chapter 1 TF2XOW
Scout and Tracer meet will they get together. And I Know she's gay enjoy the story.
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It was nice the flare makes it look like a super saiyan.cThe spikes and fire are well placed and I would love to use in fan game. It is beautiful combining black and yellow with gorgeous blue A&M spikes and the fire not being that blue it's orange again.it looks so realistic that if somebody told me ITWAS fanmade I would not believe them. I kovie it but try to work on the stomach as it looks fu my like a kangaroo. But other than that flawless. But I have one question can I use it for the fangame im making
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Kaduking: Pistols they are awesome and so are science fiction
grimmie: Today two legendary users of blaster pistols will fight to the death.
Kaduking: Jango Fett the most feared Bounty hunter of the old republic
Grimmie: And Tracer the speedy hero of Overwatch
Kaduking: I am Kaduking and she's Grimmie and we analyze the fighters weapons and skills to see who would win a DESTH battle
(cue opeaning))
kaduking: A tragic plane accident leaves Lena Oxford nearly desd in a ghost like state trapped in time.
Geimmie: Lucky for her though her friend Winston a bigass gorilla who is also a genius made her a chromo accelerator to keep her anchored in the present.
kadking: With the overwatch she fought in the Great Crisis and now fights a Blue sniper lady
grimmie: She has two pulse pistols that fire rapidly and reload in seconds, her ultimate a pulse bomb which stuns or kills, and her chromo blink where she goes forward or backwards and if she's hurt and conscious she could go back in time
Kaduking; She has a great reaction, threw Widowmakee, and goes thirty miles in hour but is frail, and not perfect.
((Tracer blinks

kaduking: On Concord Dawn a young boy Jango Ftt witnessed the murder of his fs,ily by Death Watch the rogue mandolorians and he swore vengeance.
grimmie; This sounds a lot like Scorpion 
Kaduking: He joined the Mandolorian army and became a commander at age 14. Woah and than he lost his mentor.
Grimmie: After the Death watchsituation he fought against the Jedi and his power awed Count Dooku. But soon he became a bounty hunter. Partnering up with Zam Wessel a shape shifting assasin they hunted powerful targets, soon gaining the attention of Dooku again and being give. Permission to be the clone template.
kaduking: After he tried to assassinate Queen Amidala he fought Obi Wan and was killed on Geonosis by Mace Windu
Grimmie: His legacy lived on thanks to his clone son Boba
Kaduking: His armor protects from blaster fire and explosions. He is armed with twin Westar 34pistols made to fire quickly, a rocket pack to fly 100 mph for a minute, knee pad rockets, a shoe knife, flamethrower, gauntlet rocket, an instant kill rocket toxic dart, mini Bombs, a rocket launcher, gauntlet blade, and a lightsaber
grimmie: He was able to kill seven jedis with bare hands, fought to a draw with Obi Wan, survived his jetpack blowing up on him, was trampled, and fought many opponents stronger than him with only his pistols, but he relies too much on his jetpack and once in close range he really is not that tough
((Jango flies and shoots his pistols)

Kaduking: LETS DO THIS!!
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The Administrator’s Office

      Drake and the Administrator are talking about something personal. “In the blue briefcase you will find a golden idol of the Aztecs.” “Are you sure ma’am,” asks Nathan Drake. “I am positive,” said the Administrator laughing knowing she put the idol in there and was using Nathan as a tool to train her mercs. Drake smirks and says, “Soon that will be mine.”

      The 8 Mercs all except scout who was at the time sleeping stood by the Administrator. “Some time tomorrow a man will be here trying to get the Intel if you kill him you get a golden primary weapon.” The men whooped and Demoman burped and said loudly and confused, “What's happening laddies?” The men face palm and re-explain everything.

                                  Drake’s Plane

      Nathan Drake is sitting on the plane relaxing. He was almost ready to leap out of the plane. “Elena you ready,” asked Nathan Drake, “Once we get this Idol we will be rich.” Drake smiled and Elena nodded and tossed Drake the parachute. “It is easy all I have to do is count backwards from five,” Drake said. But just then off the ground Soldier is firing rockets at the plane. “Drake what is going on,” asked Elena in a panic as the wing catches fire. “I don’t know it appears to be missiles,” said Drake tightening his Rhub Al liki scarf and looks out as another missile hits the plane but hits the cockpit and the plane nosedives towards the dirt and Drake leaps out of the plane with parachute and evades the rockets and lands gently just as the plane starts a flaming inferno of an explosion.

                         The 2fort

“ELENA,” Drake calls as the plane crashes and explodes. Drake runs to the wreckage and out of the cockpit falls a scorched Elena with a massive glass shard sticking out her chest with blood dripping freely. “You killed her. Now get dunked on.” Soldier charges and fires a rocket but it misses and Drake rolls away and uses the submachine gun to fire rapidly and Soldier crumples his helmet splits and a bullet hole is on his head. Demoman fires the sticky bombs but Drake rolls away as they bombard him. He then has his scarf lit on fire by Pyro. But he buries the machete in Pyro’s chest who mmphs in pain as he falls and bleeds out and Drake fires the AK-47 which kills Demoman due to it hitting his chest bombs blowing him to pieces. Drake runs with the sword of Drake and decapitates Heavy. “Rous, Rous,” cries Medic swinging the bonesaw but Drake catches his arm and stabs Medic in the throat with the machete and watches him bleed before running at Engineer and dodging Sentries dispatches him with a quick shot of his revolver. He sees a man in a fedora aiming at him and fires making a hole in his scarf. Dake takes out the Dragon sniper and fires through Sniper’s scope and into his eye who then falls from his tree house. “This has gone long enough,” said Spy attempting a backstab but Drake who ducks and stabs Spy through the mouth with machete twists and pulls. Spy uses the dead ringer but Drake said, “Nope,” and shoots him with his revolver and Spy falls dropping his own revolver. Drake runs down the stairs to the Intel on the way shooting Tracer in the chest through the orb saying, “This is my death battle.” He runs in and grabs Intel and steps out.

Enter the Scout

      Scout wakes up with flashing lights. The Administrator is screaming, “Scout get up intruder he has the Intel.” Scout leaps out of the old scratched up couch and ran out the door. He saw the red flashing strobe lights and leaped over a table and tumbled into a wall and shoves off it. “I wonder who the Blue team sent,” wonders Scout aloud. He runs down the stairs quickly and stumbles down it passing the shotgun rack. “Hmm I will need more than my primaries,” said Scout grabbing numerous shotguns and placing them on his back or in the Messenger bag. He puts the Pistol, the Winger, Pretty Boy's Pocket Pistol, Lugermorph, and a can of Bonk into their own individual pouches and holsters. He grabs ammunition and runs. He kicks open the push only door and sees his team lying dead on the battlefield and a yellow leg sticking out of the Intel room entrance. He sees a guy wearing a tan shirt and a blue scarf. “Let’s dance a**h**e you’re dead,” shouts Scout. Drake turns toward the Blue Scout and said, “I don’t wanna hurt you so go turn tail boy I don’t want to hurt a child,’ points his AK-47 and raises hands in frustration. “Come on how come every time I find the Holy grail somebody wants me dead,” groans Drake as he sticks a magazine in his AK-47. FIGHT! “Shut up,” yells Scout pulling the lever on his Scattergun and fires at Drake who leaps behind the wooden pillar of the bridge. Drake emerges from the cover and fires the AK-47 rapidly. RATATATATATTAT! The bullets hit the crates but Scout runs off and evades the fire and double jumps and fires the Scattergun down at Drake who leaps off the bridge and into behind a crate which the numerous shots of the Scattergun wouldn’t phase. ‘I need a quick fix,” said Drake taking out a grenade and hurling it. “One two three,” counts Drake slowly. Scout turns as the grenade bounces by him. “What the h**l,” shouts Scout as the bomb detonates but he double jumps to safety with only a few scratches. Getting closer Scout switches to the Shortstop. Drake instantly takes out his Defender and Scout seeing Drake fires and the crate falls apart with a wooden cracking noise. Drake fires back at Scout who double jumps to a side and leaps away. Drake fires four times one hitting the fort. Scout fires again grazing Drake’s hip. “Agh,” said Drake putting his hand to stop the bleeding. He walks up to Scout and slugs him in the face. Scout stumbles back and holsters his pistol. “Let’s brawl,” said Scout hurling a punch. Drake ducks and sends a powerful uppercut to Scout who stumbles. Scout kicks Drake in the crotch and hurls a high kick to Drake cutting his cheek. He switches to his bat as Drake crumbles from the kick. “Ok check out this everyone I’m batting a thousand,” taunts Scout hitting Drake in the face making him grunt and then in the stomach making him fall on his back. Scout grabs Drake and pulls him to his feet and Drake is bleeding by his noise and as Scout prepares the Home RUn taunt Drake takes out a grappling hook and lands on a tall crate. “What,” Scout says in confusion running there. Drake takes out the Tau-Sniper rifle and pulls the bolt aims and fires. “I know what snipers do,” said Scout running faster and evading the bullet as Drake pulls the bolt to eject the bullet. He switches to his M4 when Scout shoots at him with the Soda Popper sending Drake flying as the crates all broke. He lands roughly and Scout rushes him and then finally does the Home run taunt sending Drake flying into a pile of crates which fall on him. “Glad that’s over now to get that…,” said Scout but Drake gets up with a rocket and Scout turns just as he sees a flying rocket. “AW cr**,” curses Scout as he is blown up and smoke covers the room. “Goodbye kid,” said Drake but Scout walks just fine with a can of Bonk. “You know this stuff incinerates your liver but it is cool when you don’t want to die,” said Scout,. “Stand down kid, you’re outmatched,” said Drake firing the M4 rapidly but it all misses and bounces off. The fight moves to the bridge “Oh f**k,” curses Drake as Scout swings a bat at him and Drake stumbles back and accidentally steps on a sticky bomb. “Aw shit,” they both cursed as they fell into an underground mine with their weapons flying out of them into darkness as the bridge breaks.

 

The mine

    Drake lands roughly with only his Defender and machete.  Scout lands on his feet with only the pistol and his bat. Drake rushes Scout swinging his machete scout ducks and tries another bat swing but Drake uses the machete to parry causing Scout to stumble back. “You’re going to be freaking dominated,” said Scout. “Whatever you say as long as your loud mouth meets my fist,” said Drake punching Scout in the nose. “Agh you broke my nose,” yelled Scout. “That was for breaking mine,” said Drake attempting to slice Scout with the machete. Scout double jumps and switches to the pistol and fires at Drake but horribly misses as he isn’t accurate when he runs. Drake takes out the Defender twirls and fires at Scout. “Hey hotshot taste these bullets,” said Drake firing the bullets. Scout runs firing back and Drake pursues. Drake gives chase and Scout turns and swings the bat surprising Drake sending him to his knees. Scout points his pistol. ‘Goodbye thief it’s been fun while it lasted,” said Scout. But as he pulls his trigger it clicks as it is empty. “Damn it,” cursed Scout as Drake hurls a punch. Scout stumbles back and Drake finds his AK-47 on the ground. Scout reloads but leaps behind a rock as Drake fires his favorite rifle with the intent of finally kill the pesky boy. But Scout finds his weapons too and fires back with the Force a NAture all shots miss and the rocks are instead hit. Drake shrugs hearing a train. He runs off leaving Scout there and leaps on the passing train.

     

The Train

    Drake pants in tired as the train reaches above ground. He sighs in relief and pops open the briefcase and sticks the figure in his pocket finally being done and straps the case toh is back. “Glad that’s over,” sighs Drake. He climbs in and sees a familiar face. “Can’t hide from me,” said Scout cocking his Force a Nature. “Did you miss me,” asked Drake putting a fresh magazine in the AK-47. Civilians scream as they starts fire. Scout running off and firing the shotgun and Drake firing that assault rifle. A police man approaches them but Scout turns and shoots him sending the Policemen flying out of the train with a huge hole in his gut with his liver hanging out. A blonde teenage girl is on her phone texting on Twitter, “OMG these guys are fighting on a train.” Drake bursts in and fires at Scout but the teenager falls instead and what used to be her head now a mashed bloody messed falls on her phone Drake not wanting more innocents dying climbs the ladder to the roof and Scout confronts him. “You have nowhere to run so why not join the fun,” taunted Scout. Drake takes out the sniper revolver and fires a few times while Scout runs at him and jumps around avoiding the shot and kicks the gun out of his hand off the train. Scout swings his bat but Nathan Drake dodges and headbutts Scout in the gut making him stumble. Drake then grabs Scout’s arm and twists it making him drop the bat making it fall off the train. Drake hurls a punch catching scout off guard hitting his chest. Scout runs at him and swings his fists rapidly hitting Drake numerous times who grabs Scout and headbutts him in the head dazing him. Drake unholsters a revolver and fires at Scout who runs around Drake firing his own pistol. But Drake is nowhere/ Scout looks around in confusion. “Where is that bastard,” asks Scout. “Right here pal,” shouts Drake shoving Scout back inside and dropping a grenade. Drake leaps off the train and into a jeep. In the train Scout sees the grenade. “Aw fuck,” curses Scout.

     The Jeep

Drake drives the jeep and laughs, “Piece a cake,” laughs Drake driving casually. Just then he hears footsteps and looks behind him. Scout has drank Bonk and survived. He is catching up. “Come on why can’t he just die,” groans Drake. Scout leaps onto the jeep and pulls himself up. “Why won’t you stay dead,” wonders Drake out loud. “I was going to ask you the same thing,” said Scout. Drake takes out the machete and swings at Scout who ducks and swings his Atomizer Bat catching Drake in the gut. Nathan crumples and Scout prepares a home run taunt when Drake shoots the bat sending it flying and headbutts scout and then he leaps off the jeep. Scout sees the wall he crashes in and doing a final gambit shoots drake in the gut as drake hits the ground hard. But the jeep hits the wall exploding. Leaving both men saying aw crap and laying critically wounded. Drake sees a jumbo jet and makes a run for it.
                                                        The Plane
    Drake checks both mirrors and shoots the pilots. "Hello people I am Nathan Drake and I am now your freaking pilot,' said NAthan Drake taking off whistling the TF2 theme song. The Scout gets up drinks Bonk and runs for the plane firing the Force a Nature off the ground lifts the Pretty boy pocket pistol so he does not get hurt and double jumps before triple jumping with the Atomizer. On the plane he grabs his Shortstop. "Freeze have any of you losers seen a loser in a blue ugly ass scarf," Scout said. A tall man points at the cockpit and Drake leaps out of it sending it in auto pilot but Scout shoots the controls. "Shit you doomed us all," Nathan Drake shouted. He takes out the Defender pistol and fires at Scout who sidesteps and lets a few men take the bullets. Nathan Drake takes out the Machete before side stepping a Shortstop bullet. Scout switches to the Flying gullotine and flings it at Nathan who hides behind a seat and a blonde businesswoman in the face who bleeds and falls off the chair. Natah runs at Scout who swings the Sandman. Drake deflects with the machete and kicks Scout in the bnathroom before locking it from the outside. He walks away. But in the bathroom scout uses a match he found to light his bonk on fire and use it as a bomb and the door exploads. "What the hell again," Nathan groaned taking out his AK-47. But it's too late the plane rams into a building and the plane explouds and bboth men leap out the window and parachute into the ground a jungle. But NAthan rams into Scout before slicing his cheek with the machete. And scout shoots Nathan in the gut with the shortstop before they land/

                                                           Saxton's Artificial Jungle
    Scout fires the Soda popper and Nathan fires the AK-47 all shots hit the others' bullets. And Scout switches to the Crit a COla and mixes it with BONK and runs at Nathan invincible and swings the Atomizer and Drake goes flying. "Gotta knock it outta the park," Scout shouts. Drake hits a palm tree and gets up and spits blood. He loads the RPG and fires. Scout is walking away but leaps making the rocket miss. Nathan charges with Francis drake's blade and Scout the shortrune blade but Nathan stabs Scout in the chest. Scout pulls the blade out and bleeds a lt. rake fires a rocket and after beign blown up. He gets up and you can see his chest. "You're gonna get dominated," Scout yeleld before Drake shoot s him with pistol and Scout screams but survives. Drake runs before scout could counter sticks the Ak-47 into his moutn and shoots leaving Scout's head to be blopwn up. Brains and skull matter fly everywhere. Blood pools beneath him. Drake falls bloodied and badly injured. "of course I beat him and than die," He quotes. He lays before a helocopter with Sully and nathan carried where he passes out in the helocopter. "You're stronger than I thought," Lara Croft said walking over and kisses his forehead and Drake smirks in his "sleep." KO!!

Kaduking: That was brutal.
Grimmie: Indeed. WHile Scout was faster and looked more durable. Drake is indeed stronger.
Kaduking: While to send a 300 pound man flying takes 1,800 pounds of force. Drake pushed a 1 ton crate wjoch is 2000 pounds 200 pounds more. 
Grimmie: And his weapons are way more reliable and accurate and do more damage. Instead of being faster Nathan's are reliable and have one shotted people. Scout struggles knocking out Heavy.
Kaduking: And Drake survived way more powerful explosions.
Grimmie: Indeed.
Kaduking: Scout was knocked out of the park
Grimmie: The winner is Nathan Drake

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